Now, expand. Turn to the camera and speak the word "You". (This word is among the most powerful in advertising. Because it catches the attention of the audience. And triggers their imagination. They start to "see" themselves participating in the things you are showing or describing.)

Example script (phrased as a "You Message"):

"It was such a wonderful, exotic experience visiting this almost magical villiage that seems to float on the water.
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Are you looking for an exciting vacation – for yourself and your family to enjoy? This village is well off the beaten path of tourists. You get to see and taste the exotic sights and culture of these friendly people. Unique things that tourists never get to see. … blah, blah, blah …
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Even though this spot is remote, it's easily accessible to you. Once you know the insider secrets. It's only a two hour sail out of Port So-and-So. And you get to see the beautiful azure blue deep water on this lovely relaxing trip.
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Yes, we have our own boat. But, you can rent one from Captain Peg-Leg-Pete's boat rental at …. His rates are surprisingly affordable. … etc., etc., etc."

Tell them HOW.

Hint: Did you notice how often the magic power word "You" was used in that script? It Pulls your audience INTO the story.